Saturday, October 16, 2010

Some like it hot....

This post is a themed writing project challenge taken from Jenny Matlock over at off on my tangent.

Jenny says we can use UP to 100 words to tell our story. It can be fact or fiction. Jenny posts a few words, a prompt that we work from. This weeks prompt is in bold itallics.





The gigantic fake breasts made it up the porch steps before the chest they sat on did.

A crimson painted rosebud shaped mouth didn’t do more than pout as its owner’s hand held out a pillow case balanced on huge, made by mother, cleavage.

The blonde wig hugged the head it was placed on like it was God issued, and thick liner developed, and defined, doe like eyes.

The black mole made it O-fficial.

"Trick or treat!" they shouted as the door opened..."

"Hey...it's Marilyn Monroe!!!" chuckled the man giving the candy.

8 year old Ronald Richard J wasn’t the least bit impressed he’d been recognized.

21 comments:

  1. That is sooo funny and cute and so right for what an eight year old would understand.
    Nice take on the prompt. Seamlessly written!
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Anna's SC week #24

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  2. This was a cute, clever take on the prompt. Your descriptions are perfect, I can just see that poor boy with his pouting mouth. Nicely done! Kat

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  3. Brillant!! and so well written :o)

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  4. Wow! Such brilliant creative writing. I had that picture clearly in my head! Brill!

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  5. I believe I've seen a few boys like that at my door before, ha. Cute centus.

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  6. heehee

    Love the pouting lips that tell both sides of the tale.

    =)

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  7. Oh what a surprising and original take on the prompt! I am very impressed . I can just picture the costume pillow breasts too . Nice one.

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  8. There's always one or two of those who show up at my door each year! Great take on this week's prompt.

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  9. Dear PBB: This picture you "painted" made me laugh. Thanks for the fun..LOL Mom

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  10. That was brilliant, Koby! The twist at the end was hilarious. Poor kid. Well, there's always therapy! LOL!

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  11. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Awesome and hysterical!!

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  12. fabulous! I just loved this one - my favorite thus far. I pictured the whole thing.

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  13. That was extremely fun. Hopefully little Ronald scored some great candy. Poor kid deserved it.
    xoRobyn

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  14. Your imagery is great! I could just see the "mini" Marilyn with the beauty mark! Nice job!

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  15. haha great humour. i wasnt expecting it to be a child at all!

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  16. Great take and so filled with concrete images! I could see it all. Wonderful writing..............cj

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  17. How cute! The things some parents do to their poor kids!

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  18. OK, this weeks links are totally amazing.

    I am soooo impressed with this little story...and I totally didn't see this particular twist coming.

    What wonderful writing you shared here.

    And I adored this story.

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