Saturday, June 5, 2010

Glad to meet ya.......

Another Saturday Centus, a themed writing meme. The challenge is to write 100 words to add to the prompt started by Jenny Matlock from off on my tangent.


The writing prompt is in itallics...

“It’s your own fault” I whispered into her ear as I choked the life out of her.

Just like the other times I worked methodically cleaning my mess.

What could I take from this one to add to my collection?

Her cross necklace came off easy enough.

A quick rifle though her handbag earned me twenty dollars and a ticket to the matinee.

I’d look around, never too soon to make a new friend.

They didn’t hang around very long.

I settled into the comfortable movie theater seat with awkward 3D glasses perched on my nose, a small tub of popcorn on my lap, and a bottle of water lodged into the seat holder.

I quickly noticed the pretty, petite blonde ” Excuse me miss” I said, tapping her shoulder “you dropped something”.

14 comments:

  1. Nice, creepy take on this week's prompt. Love the way you got your protagonist into the theater! BTW, scrolled down and read your post on party anxiety. I was laughing out loud, I just want through this for our daughter's (college) graduation party. Now who feels old? Kathy

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  2. Awesome! Been reading too many James Patterson novels, huh? :) I enjoyed...thanks!

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  3. Wow, great job Koby! That creeped me out! Very well written!

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  4. Whoa, this is dark. What's going on inside your head? There's a book coming soon right?

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  5. Whoa, this was dark, creepy and scary. Great job LOL.

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  6. creeeeeepy!! Loved it. great job!

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  7. I might have to decline your invitation to the movies...no, wait...anywhere!

    You're scary!

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  8. This was gloriously gruesome!! Superb!!!!

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  9. oh my another totally awesome creepy one! I see so much potential for entire books in these! FUN!

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  10. very nice...
    I love it!
    a serial killer...
    Mine is here
    Have you a great Sunday!
    hugs
    shakira

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  11. Dear PPB: Wow, I love serial killer stories and you caught me AGAIN.. I did not see that coming...LOL Mom

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  12. Wow! So dark...had me sucked in for sure...Peace and blessings

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  13. Oh, creepy. Let me know when you write your first novel. My husband loves tales like this. I'm still trying to get my nerve up to read the Bobbsy Twins. Being scared and being me can never be in the same skin together.

    Awesome use of the prompt.

    Thank you for linking up!

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