Saturday, March 19, 2011

A love like no other....

This post is a themed writing project challenge taken from Jenny Matlock over at off on my tangent. Jenny says we can use UP to 100 words to tell a story. It can be fact or fiction. Jenny posts a few words, a prompt that we work from. This weeks prompt is in bold italics.

The curtain parted, marking the official start to the most embarrassing hour of Morgan Clark’s young life.

The event leading up to this moment began about a week before when her annoying brother remarked “I think its time for an over the shoulder boulder holder for the former President of the Itty Bitty Titty Committee” loud enough for their mother to overhear.

Their mother-daughter bonding trip to the JCPenny bra fitter was pure torture.

BUT her brother’s trip to the ER probably trumped that….

The IcyHot she’d rubbed into his Mini Marble Holder had caused quite a (hilarious) stir.

Paybacks are a "b".

23 comments:

  1. Wow! What a loving family...not!

    Inappropriate children - glad this is fictional!

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  2. Funny, and so well written ;-) Peace and blessings

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  3. Oh how I loved the way you took this prompt...so creative and gee did you ever bring back my fond memory of that first bra trip with Mommy! Let's see they made triple A's......early and ready before our time as I remember! Great stuff, thanks!

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  4. Sibling rivalry is for kids!!

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  5. Sounds like our house. Only our code word for bras is "shoes".

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  6. hahahaha, that was freaking hilarious. great job.

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  7. LOL! Pure awesomeness! Loved your take on the prompt!

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  8. Koby, your word choice is so silly and playful. Every phrase and line is filled with fun.
    Great piece.
    xoRobyn

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  9. ouch! you took me back to days of quivering behind the curtain while and older woman measured ...

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  10. I'm sorry, but I don't understand this text.
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Anna's SC week 46 'curtain parted'

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  11. Another naughty but nice one!

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  12. This was hilarious! I love it! Paybacks are a B, indeed. Clever girl! Kat

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  13. Both humorous AND articulate. Well done!

    =)

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  14. One word for this one: hilarious! I grew up in the era of itty bitty titties and over shoulder boulder holders, but I don't remember mini marble holders. Could have used it on my three brothers! Great take on this prompt!

    Namaste..........cj

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  15. There's nothing like revenge, is there?

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  16. A loving sibling relationship there;-)

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  17. Never got round to reading this one last week, love it! And immensely curious about how you'll play with "I'm not a chicken . . . "

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  18. I loved this!

    You took me back with some of this phraseology...and while I never had a brother this would have been something I'm sure I would have been tempted to do in retaliation!

    Clever, clever, clever!

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